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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 6, 2010 1:39:27 GMT -5
So...In an effort to keep some chapter sections on the same page, I've created this thread for you to discuss the sites "official" fanfiction
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Post by Madoka Mizu on Mar 6, 2010 1:48:57 GMT -5
Ugh, i dunno why you're forcing me to post in here, Kio, I already told you what I think about it(lol jk jk). Anywhoooo... detail's amazing, I can actually see myself there perfectly in most, if not all, the scenes. The characters introduced so far are good as far as the emotions put into them in each of the scenes(I get a little scared with some of their behavior... but in a good way! Don't shoot me!). The cliffhangers left in each part are really good and pretty decent for each part they're put in. Annnddd one thing I think is interesting is the jumps from past and present. I don't know 'bout everyone else, but I like it, it's something I personally haven't seen before. All in all, it's really great so far, I'm realllllyyyy looking forward to the next chapter  Happy, 'Kio? It was more than a "It's good" and "I loved it"... much more XDD |
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Post by Leanna Cross on Mar 6, 2010 15:31:17 GMT -5
*picks jaw up from the floor* Whoa...
Okay, I'm officially a Low fangirl! Well when he acts country that is...
I love the way you described the characters and the way the setting is. It's like we were standing right there watching the events unfold before our eyes.
I see a very very good plot forming here...
I'm interested on what Low and Sho did as they grew up and how the 4 horsemen came into play...
Reminds me of Left Behind except Left Behind is about the actual appocolyse in the Bible. This version of it is completely amazing and I know I'm not the only curious one to see how it turns out.
Oh and Awesome on the posting soon! Miso happeh!
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 6, 2010 15:35:02 GMT -5
I'll also be happy to answer a few questions as long as they won't give away any spoilers to the fanfic. @madoka - Yes, I am happy @leanna - I've never played Left Behind before lol. Anyways, the four horsemen in this story have powers based on that in the bible, so there's Death (Reaper), Brute (War), and Plague (Plague). The fourth is yet to be revealed, of course |
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Post by Leanna Cross on Mar 6, 2010 15:57:36 GMT -5
Left Behind is a book series just to let ya know... (13 books of amazingness) And okay then... I'm waiting to find out the 4th's name... So may I ask the faboulous author a few questions? What inspired you to write this?  |
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 6, 2010 16:03:52 GMT -5
I was actually going to write 4HM for Tyson as the site's "Official Fanfic" to help him advertise the site on Fanfiction.net. He said he didn't need it and the site became flooded with members, but I decided to go ahead and write it anyways. I love to write, so I guess my love of writing is what motivated me the most.
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Post by Hotaru King on Mar 6, 2010 16:10:04 GMT -5
*nods head* Good answer, I applaud you! *golf clap*
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Post by Leanna Cross on Mar 6, 2010 16:10:50 GMT -5
Okay, next question.
(I'm interviewing the author while I can ^ ^)
Did anyone inspire you're characters in some way or are you just that creative?
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 6, 2010 16:12:56 GMT -5
Well I'd first like to say that the characters Akio and Tsu're aren't exactly like they are in the story. The character that inspired the creation of Low wasn't a character at all. Low is "The Dream of the Western Frontier", kind of like the idolized image of how everyone in the wild west looked. So, no, I guess. Nobody really inspired the creation of characters, the only one who has anything behind him is Low who, as mentioned before, is soley based off of a dream, not a reality.
That being said, this is only based off of the current character set. There may be more who have a bit more inspiration.
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Post by Leanna Cross on Mar 6, 2010 16:19:37 GMT -5
Thanks for the clear up on that. I will be back later with more questions and hopefully those who read this will be glad that I asked! ^ ^
Thank you for your time.
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Mar 6, 2010 16:49:12 GMT -5
Okay, wow on Chapter 2.
How could you kill Low off so easily?
Little Luke is adorable and awesome btw... Curious how he doesn't look any different.
Glad to see Tsu're has come in again as well...
I'd be pretty cautious with the 3 of the horsemen if I were them.
Can't wait for more and I loved it!
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 7, 2010 0:11:45 GMT -5
To answer your question, it was quite easy, seeing as how Low died in the chapter after he made an appearance lol
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Mar 7, 2010 0:18:17 GMT -5
Ha... very funny... :/
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Post by Jack King on Mar 7, 2010 22:31:57 GMT -5
I'm glad you continued Akio. ^^ But how could you kill off Low like that? Sure it was a cool way to go and all, but I like Low  . Still, I want to see more of this! Why hasn't Luke aged is one of my biggest questions, though I'm sure that'll be explained soon enough. Also, when a new person starts talking a new paragraph starts. That was a little grammatical problem I saw. Easily fixed, but it can make it confusing when two different people talk in the same paragraph. It's also a pet peeve of mine so I'm prolly blowing it outta proportion. More please! I love the story! |
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 7, 2010 23:26:55 GMT -5
Hah its good to know that i have 3 fans (considering half of these posts are alts). Anyways, please, if you have read the story at least say so on this topic. I want to know who's actually reading it ^^
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. Still, I want to see more of this! Why hasn't Luke aged is one of my biggest questions, though I'm sure that'll be explained soon enough.