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Post by Madoka Mizu on Mar 22, 2010 0:46:41 GMT -5
Okay, I personally got more curious about Sho with the new chapter. Did I miss something with the whole Everyone hates him thing(if i did, i apologize, naturally slow at life here ^^')? Last time I checked it wasn't his fault Low got killed and all... I wanna know more about Growth(but, 'Kio, I'm not one of his fangirls like you predicted XP). He seems cool and all, especially since he's being nice to Sho , a tad mysterious too. I know this has been pointed out already... but why hasn't Luke friggin' aged??? Is he human or what(simply curious ^^)? And one more thing... what's with Jade? She only seems friendly with a select few people... One more thing(goodness, I'm reminding myself of the Jackie Chan cartoon right now), will the two duelist from when they got to Hawaii come up again in the story, or were they just little extra people character thingies? Well, I think that's it for this round. I feel so honored! I read it the moment it was posted, and I STILL haven't been caught! Oops, compy's dying, gotta save it! Great chapter 'Kio, keep it up!!
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 22, 2010 9:14:50 GMT -5
1) If you remember, Low only saved Sho because Low owed Sho his life (say that five times fast). It was pointed out when Low first arrived that Sho had betrayed people, now you're finding out who it was he betrayed. You just don't know how he betrayed them yet ^^ 2) You will be 3) You'll find out why Luke hasn't aged. He IS human though. 4) Jade's a bit strange. She didn't know who Sho was so she was a bit suspicious of him. But if you saw a random guy looking at your shirt, would you be all that happy? lol. 5) The two duelists will come up again. There are only 10 duelists left alive (not counting the horsemen), I don't have room to make filler characters lol
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Post by Tekka King on Mar 22, 2010 17:35:29 GMT -5
I like these more and more as they come! Keep on putting 'em out Kio! *clears throat* Right, onto the more (not really) serious review. *assorted snickers break out and are soon shushed by a potato gun*
Growth is new, and I like him, he doesn't seem too bad and he's nice to Sho. ^^ So Jade's never met Sho before, at least I'm guessing.
Since the story would probably be incredibly short if Sho DIDN'T accept the leadership position, I'm gonna hazard a guess that he does. With that prediction in my head, I'm also going to guess that he meets up with those two kids either in a duel or to tech the loser a thing or two.
Then again, I have this nasty habit of being completely and utterly wrong. ^^"
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Mar 22, 2010 20:22:01 GMT -5
Okay, I really like what you did with Growth... He's mysterious and very intersting in my opinion. Jade is also an interesting character and I'm curious to how much of a role she is going to play. Along with the two duelists in Hawaii.
Oh and it's awesome how you added in Hawaii and how its changed. Makes it more like the future could be which interests me and personally anyone I think.
And I still like adorable little Luke although I'm curious to how he hasn't aged.
I don't know whether to feel sorry for Sho or not... he did betray his friends (although we don't know how) but everyone does hate him for it and therefore I feel sorry for him.
Loved it Kio! ^ ^
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Mar 24, 2010 0:06:53 GMT -5
Hey, here's the deal. I won't be able to update this weekend (sorry) because I am going to Ontario, California for an ITS festival. In the meantime, here's a little something to hold you over. This is the first time I'm doing this (and probably the only time), but I'll show you guys a chapter before it's finished.
Chapter 4: Virtue
-15 Years before-
Akio, remember what I have told you in the past. You must remember, above all else, to love peace and fight war. You must remember to find the loved solution, not the reasonable one. Within reason there is conflict.
Akio wondered amongst the area. The door was open and he was staring at the figure before him. He looked towards the side out of curiosity to see if anyone was watching him. He was four now, it was his birthday yesterday though the monks that he had lived with paid no mind. Instead of seeing a human being, he saw a mirror, he saw himself. His blonde hair was a bit messy and covered a bit of his left eye. His hat wasn’t fully on his head, it was a bit tilted to the left. His one free eye was its same shade of purple, but since he was tired a red color filled the rest of his eyes. He then looked back to the door. He saw a teenager ahead of him, around the age of 19. The teenager had slick black hair with a smug look on his face. He was pale with eyes that looked like coal. When he spoke, his voice was dignified and sophisticated. His mouth moved, but they barely matched the words he had said. It was as if he was just learning to speak.
He wore a brown t-shirt and had a bit of muscle that was tucked into his black pants. He had a brown belt that went over the pants. He smiled.
“Hello Akio. You may call me Lux.”
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Post by Hotaru King on Mar 24, 2010 9:17:50 GMT -5
Yay!! I knew you loved us, Kio! lol and Akio's back(in the story that is lol). Well, hope ya have a fun time where you're goin'! XD
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Mar 25, 2010 19:19:51 GMT -5
Eep! Can't wait for more! Lux certainly is an interesting character... YAY! Kio's backz!!!! lol
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Apr 13, 2010 23:51:28 GMT -5
Next chapter is finally up. Thank you all for your patience. Sorry, I really have a lot on my plate right now. This chapter answers the following questions:
1) What happens between Lux and Akio? 2) What is the group going to do about the horsemen? 3) Which horseman will the group go after first? 4) What path will Sho choose
And finally, the one everyone's been asking
5) Why hasn't Luke aged?
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Post by Hotaru King on Apr 14, 2010 15:39:46 GMT -5
Holy.... Friggin... crap!!! Luke's Lucifer?!?!?!
That was definantly something I DIDN'T see coming, lol. I freaked out when I read that, it was just, wow. That was a great twist, totally didn't predict that!
I was already hooked on this story before, but now, I'm addicted! Lol I'm really curious to see what's gonna happen next ^^
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Apr 14, 2010 22:26:47 GMT -5
*picks up dropped jaw* Holy crap... O.O wowwwww Didn't expect the Luke-Lucifer thing... Darn... no wonder I thought Luke was adorable! he's friggin Lucifer!! XD
Can't wait for more Kio! Loved the twist!
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Apr 23, 2010 0:42:29 GMT -5
Chapter 5 is out.
It's a Luke and Tsu're heavy chapter.
Info about Tsu're's past is revealed, something dark from the past arises and Lucifer finally finds a foe worth battling.
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Post by Madoka Mizu on Apr 23, 2010 22:28:42 GMT -5
Oh wow. I think that was my favorite chapter yet. Poor Tsu're, I feel sorry for him and the detail put into the Luke/Lucifer/Tsu're scene was awesome! I like that, detail's a big thing for me(kinda obvious, me knowzz ^^) Anyways, keep it up, 'Kio, you're doing an excellent job as always! ^^
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Apr 24, 2010 0:15:40 GMT -5
Omg that was an amazing chapter!!!!!! XDDDD
I think Luke is one of my favorites lol even though the Lucifer thing...
NO! They can't kill Sho! Bad!
Sad past for Tsu're... and an interesting battle.
You did amazing Kio! ^ ^ Can't wait for more! XDD
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Post by Keisko Azuma on Apr 25, 2010 14:14:00 GMT -5
Kio, I love the character glossary!!!
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Post by Akio Nyuhara on Jul 27, 2010 18:10:31 GMT -5
Season 2 chapter 6 part 1 is out
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